April 22nd, 2008 by fwps
Sadness
Sadness is cold and blue,
It tastes like salty tears,
Sadness smells like a burning bonfire,
It is pitch black like looking into the sea,
It sounds like a little boy sobbing,
It makes you feel empty inside.
Category P3/4, Voki, poetry |
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Clearly said CJ.
Owen and Connor
Nice poem!
Alistair and Emily
Cool poem, it made me feel sad.
Fifi
It was excellent, I loved it.
Catherine
Cameron this poem creates a real feeling of sadness. I thought the tone of your voice helped when you read it aloud. Well done.
Miss Reid
I loved your poem Cameron and you read it very well. It certainly shows what sadness feels like.
Mrs Commander
I thought that was a lovely poem and you had nice expreshon.
Hi CJ ,
I thought you had great expression when you read that,
It made me fell sad inside,
Very well done,
From Stephy .
Hi,
That was fantastic,
From JoJo.
Bye for now.
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April 23rd, 2008 at 1:59 am
Clearly said CJ.
Owen and Connor
Nice poem!
Alistair and Emily
Cool poem, it made me feel sad.
Fifi
It was excellent, I loved it.
Catherine
Cameron this poem creates a real feeling of sadness. I thought the tone of your voice helped when you read it aloud. Well done.
Miss Reid
April 23rd, 2008 at 9:46 am
I loved your poem Cameron and you read it very well. It certainly shows what sadness feels like.
Mrs Commander
May 12th, 2008 at 10:46 pm
I thought that was a lovely poem and you had nice expreshon.
May 13th, 2008 at 9:15 am
Hi CJ ,
I thought you had great expression when you read that,
It made me fell sad inside,
Very well done,
From Stephy .
May 16th, 2008 at 9:21 am
Hi,
That was fantastic,
From JoJo.
Bye for now.